Wednesday 28 June 2017

The alien invasion


PART ONE
One quiet night in a street cars were coming past when Isaac and Toby looked at a car that was zooming past. what a night said Toby as he came out of the time machine.I agree said Isaac. The stars were shining and the moon was bright.  But what they didn't know was that aliens were watching them the alien king was invading already. Toby woke up and said why isn't the sun coming up and all the plants are dead.Toby woke up Isaac and said all the plants are dead. What the said Isaac. I know said Toby.Alien invasion they both said.Toby unleashed rip tide.I got my daggers said Isaac. They battled hard until no more aliens were left.but standing right there in front of them was the alien king!



2 comments:

  1. HI Isaac, good work on getting you're story published on you're blog. Now go back and have ago at adding punctuation like "speech marks." For example:

    "What a night" said Toby as he came out of the time machine.
    "I agree" said Isaac.

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  2. Hi Isaac I love your story are you into aliens? Maybe next time you could work on doing spaces after your full stops. Keep up the good work. Hannah!!!

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